Comments for Words from the Web http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting Just another Edubuzz.org weblog Fri, 09 Jan 2009 11:17:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on Monster descriptions part II by ecraig http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/06/13/monster-descriptions-part-ii/#comment-10 ecraig Fri, 27 Jun 2008 09:22:42 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/06/13/monster-descriptions-part-ii/#comment-10 From P1/2: We have just been looking at your monster oicture for our descriptions. We like them but they don't exactly like ours! Next time we need to use more detail so that you know what to draw! Callum: Our pictures were in felt tip pen not paint! From P1/2:
We have just been looking at your monster oicture for our descriptions. We like them but they don’t exactly like ours! Next time we need to use more detail so that you know what to draw!
Callum: Our pictures were in felt tip pen not paint!

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by Katrina Cummings http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-9 Katrina Cummings Tue, 13 May 2008 18:52:46 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-9 I thought all the monsters were great, the children had obviously worked very hard on them, they were lovely and colourful, well done. I thought all the monsters were great, the children had obviously worked very hard on them, they were lovely and colourful, well done.

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by brodie http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-8 brodie Mon, 12 May 2008 14:15:40 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-8 Anna you were very good at drawing my monster. Anna you were very good at drawing my monster.

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by Katie http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-7 Katie Mon, 12 May 2008 14:11:44 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-7 I thought Frazer did a good job. from katie I thought Frazer did a good job.

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]]> Comment on Monster Project! by Alex http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-6 Alex Mon, 12 May 2008 14:11:09 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-6 Heather, I think you did well from Alex Heather, I think you did well from Alex

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by lucy http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-5 lucy Mon, 12 May 2008 14:09:34 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-5 I thought callums monster was very good. I thought callums monster was very good.

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by Ms Finlayson http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-4 Ms Finlayson Mon, 12 May 2008 13:34:30 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-4 Hi P1 and 2 at Athelstanford. Today P1-3 at Stenton have looked at your pictures as our whiteboard is working again. We're all really impressed with how similar they are, and somne of us have noticed things we could have described better. Hi P1 and 2 at Athelstanford. Today P1-3 at Stenton have looked at your pictures as our whiteboard is working again. We’re all really impressed with how similar they are, and somne of us have noticed things we could have described better.

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by ecraig http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-3 ecraig Mon, 21 Apr 2008 19:30:08 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-3 I can't wait to see Stenton's monsters! Well done P1 and P2! I can’t wait to see Stenton’s monsters! Well done P1 and P2!

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by Mrs Gillanders @ Stenton http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-2 Mrs Gillanders @ Stenton Sun, 20 Apr 2008 12:24:06 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-2 Well done P1 and P2 at Athelstandeford - your pictures are great! You have obviously really listened well to the descriptions and you have created some wonderful pictures - having seen the original drawings in school I know that some of them are very close! Well done P1 and P2 at Athelstandeford - your pictures are great!
You have obviously really listened well to the descriptions and you have created some wonderful pictures - having seen the original drawings in school I know that some of them are very close!

]]> Comment on Monster Project! by notnets http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-1 notnets Fri, 18 Apr 2008 13:05:46 +0000 http://edubuzz.org/blogs/primarywriting/2008/04/15/monster-project/#comment-1 P1 and 2 at Athelstaneford I LOVE your pictures. My class haven't seen them yet because we didn't have time to look today, but next week we will all have a look. I just compared your pictures to the original ones drawn here at Stenton, and they are very similar! I promise to put ours on the blog soon, and we're looking forward to hearing your descriptions of your own monsters. Ms Finlayson @ Stenton. P1 and 2 at Athelstaneford I LOVE your pictures. My class haven’t seen them yet because we didn’t have time to look today, but next week we will all have a look.
I just compared your pictures to the original ones drawn here at Stenton, and they are very similar!
I promise to put ours on the blog soon, and we’re looking forward to hearing your descriptions of your own monsters.

Ms Finlayson @ Stenton.

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