Cinquains in the sun!
Today we took our classroom outside ! We have been studying the structure of poems and this week we are looking at cinquains.They are 5 line poems.Each line has a different number of words and syllables.Can you work out what the pattern is?
It was such a nice day we thought it would be different to work outside.We all found a spot to work and joined together at the end to share our poems.It was tricky to find the right phrase with the correct number of words and syllables.We will post our finished poems tomorrow.
Cricket
Batsman v Bowler
Hitting Perfect Sixes
Bowlers Gotta Focus Bowling
Bowled
by Jason
Puppies
Fluffy,Cuddly
Running Round Gardens
Cute,Loving Little Animals
Playful
By Rachel
Vampires
Bitter Spirits
Perishing in Battle
Heavenly Beings at Twilight
Deathly
By Bronwyn
Dirtbike
speeding around
engine throttle speeding
speeding down the river side track
speed
Connor
Football
football fever
supporters wave wildly
hibernian are the greatest
hibbes
by Kieran
Acting
Rehearsing hard
Audition for parts
Audience concentrate on you
Perform
by Erin
Football
kicking tackling
scoaring perfect peaches
cmon glasgow rangers f.c.
rangers
by Robbie
Iraq
Assault rifles
Army reloading fast
Dying talibans in Iraq
Fighting
BY Grant
monte
furry funny
biting,jumping,playing
really fluffy cuddly fluffball
doggie
by Amber
Football
Kicking,hacking
Scoring perfect peaches
winning,losing,cheering,brillant
Rangers
By Brogan
Zebras
Stripy horses
Scared very easily
Great,amazing,lovely creatres
Awesome
By Sarah
Puppies
Little show-offs
Always chewing furniture
Amazing,cuddly,fluffy,great
Funny
By Jaimee
football
big stadiums
shooting a penalty
football is really amazing
shooting
by Shaun
football
big stadiums
shooting a penalty
football has really amazing
matches
by Lee
on May 20th, 2008 at 7:05 pm
Really like all your poems, well done!! Amber, you couldn’t resist…. you had to write yours about Monte! But you’re still not having him. ha ha
on May 24th, 2008 at 12:07 pm
Your poems are fantastic everyone!! Not surprised about the dirtbikes Connor and glad to see Erin is still into acting!!! Hope you are all good and looking forward to moving forward to P.L.
on May 24th, 2008 at 12:48 pm
Good to hear from you Miss McNair!Hope you are enjoying Whitecraig.We are trying hard to create an intersesting class blog. Watch out for volcanoes soon……
on May 25th, 2008 at 4:44 pm
Thanks Miss MacNair for commenting on our Page. I’m REALLY into vampires like obsessed
Anyway I’m really looking forward to P.L so is everyone else in class and we hope we see you in the future. P.S- There was a rumour that you were at the Summer Fair is it true. Thanks Again 
on May 25th, 2008 at 6:01 pm
where was i ha ha
i cant see mee!! and i wasent there lol im stumped lol
on May 26th, 2008 at 9:56 pm
Working hard, this term is soooo busy for P7!!! Bronwyn, I am sorry but I didn’t make the summer fair. I do read yor website though!! If you get the chance you can have a look at mine, although it needs to be updated more regularly!!!!