Cinquains in the sun!

Posted on May 19th, 2008 in home by jhunter

Today we took our classroom outside !  We have been studying the structure of poems and this week we are looking at cinquains.They are 5 line poems.Each line has a different number of words and syllables.Can you work out what the pattern is?

It was such a nice day we thought it would be different to work outside.We all found a spot to work and joined together at the end to share our poems.It was tricky to find the right phrase with the correct number of words and syllables.We will post our finished poems tomorrow.

Cricket
Batsman v Bowler
Hitting Perfect Sixes
Bowlers Gotta Focus Bowling
Bowled

by Jason

Puppies
Fluffy,Cuddly
Running Round Gardens
Cute,Loving Little Animals
Playful

By Rachel

Vampires
Bitter Spirits
Perishing in Battle
Heavenly Beings at Twilight
Deathly

By Bronwyn

Dirtbike
speeding around
engine throttle speeding
speeding down the river side track
speed

Connor

Football
football fever
supporters wave wildly
hibernian are the greatest
hibbes

by Kieran

Acting
Rehearsing hard
Audition for parts
Audience concentrate on you
Perform

by Erin

Football
kicking tackling
scoaring perfect peaches
cmon glasgow rangers f.c.
rangers

by Robbie

Iraq
Assault rifles
Army reloading fast
Dying talibans in Iraq
Fighting

BY Grant

monte
furry funny
biting,jumping,playing
really fluffy cuddly fluffball
doggie

by Amber

Football
Kicking,hacking
Scoring perfect peaches
winning,losing,cheering,brillant
Rangers

By Brogan

Zebras
Stripy horses
Scared very easily
Great,amazing,lovely creatres
Awesome

By Sarah

Puppies
Little show-offs
Always chewing furniture
Amazing,cuddly,fluffy,great
Funny

By Jaimee

football
big stadiums
shooting a penalty
football is really amazing
shooting

by Shaun

football
big stadiums
shooting a penalty
football has really amazing
matches

by Lee