Onomatopoeia Explosion in 7A
A Day At The Sea
Crystal clear water,
Rippling against the rocks,
Crabs come nearer,
Wind goes farther,
Over the station the black smoke belches out
by Amber Curran
Helping Beautiful
I stared at the sky and,
I stared at the sea,
It went splish, splash, boom and whee,
The clouds above trickle and roar,
Bloob, pitter, patter the mountain galore.
The mountain up high and the sea down low,
The water shimmers clear and glows,
Up the water goes and goes,
Climate change grows more and more.
The clouds reflected the sea tonight,
Wondering what was that light,
The light above cracking through and through,
Shimmering on the rocks I knew.
The light in the sea,
Romantic and Bright,
But pollution comes to mind,
And I will help this night.
By Bronwyn
Hydrant overflow
crack,bang,boom the fire hydrant is bulging.
Whoosh,splash,crash more water goes in that doesn’t come out.
Crank,crank,crank the opening is coming off.
whoosh,crank,whoosh,crank more water top going to burst.
Bang,roar the top comes off whoooosh out comes the water,bubbles and foam.
Splish,splash,splosh the water is gone.
by Grant & Jason
RIVER RAPIDS
crash,roar,whoosh on the rocks
bubbling,frothing,foaming
splish,splash,splosh
spurting water on the rocks
fast flowing water
down the rockin river rapids
by Lewis


on May 17th, 2008 at 6:26 pm
I was so impressed with your poems at Assembly. It is great having them on the website to share with more people. Well done!