P4 Poetry
Ellie McNeill in P4 wrote this poem at home.
Dogs are brilliant,
Dogs are fun,
If I could cuddle one on my knee,
What a happy girl I’d be.
There’s nothing better
Don’t you think?
Even if it’s spotted,striped or pink!
I don’t mind which colour or breed,
A cute pet dog is what I need!
Dogs are brilliant,
Dogs are magic,
To live without one would be tragic.
I’d like a puppy or even Seven,
Then I’d feel like I was in heaven.
I love Dogs!
Posted: February 22nd, 2008 under Primary 4.
Comments: 2
Comments
Comment from Ellie
Time: May 21, 2008, 5:29 pm
Heyyaaaa
I like the play were doing on friday but i cant talk with the mask on properly.And i like the work were doing in class.
Comment from megin
Time: June 29, 2008, 4:29 pm
hi
i really like your dog poem
espically the bit whereit said
spotty striped or pink
so thats the way to go elz
is a dog your next pet
ha ha ha ha ha ha!!
see you later
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