Volcanoes and Earthquakes September 23, 2008
Posted by Law Upper in : P7 , trackbackWell done to everyone for completing this first piece of Personal Research! Your teachers are very much looking forward to reading all your work and learning from you as they do so.
By now you should have had an opportunity to look at a selection of other people’s work, and perhaps even complete a Peer Assessment.
Your homework this week is to write a comment stating what you learned from being given the chance to see Personal Research completed by others in your class: in what way does it help you to see others’ projects? How will this affect how you do your next piece of Personal Research? How did you feel about other people being allowed to look closely at your own work?
Remember to give quality comments, written in full (well-punctuated) sentences!
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I really liked reading other peoples projects.
I have learned that there is many ways that you can present your project.
It helps me see that people present other projects differently than others.
I think it will make me work harder on the next one than this one because i have see different ways to present them.
I felt very happy with people looking at my own work because i really like people seeing my project and they can give me good advice on how to maybe improve on the next one.
I thought it was good to see other peoples projects because it might give you good ideas for next time and it could help you improve future projects. I felt alright letting others see my project. I think seeing how other people did theirs might help me next time.
I thought it was a good idea to see other projects because you get loads of ideas for next time. I didn’t really want to show other people my project incase scrumpled the pages up
I really like reading other peoples project because it gave me lots of good ideas for my future project. I hope I can improve next time
I thought it was good seeing other peoples projects was a good idea because it will help me in the other projects I do. It shows other people have different ideas that make their projects unique.
I think it was really good looking at other people’s work because you can learn things about volcanoes and earthquakes that other people have done.I think that it will help me because lots of people have shown me new ways to lay things out and lots more.I think it is good that other people read your own work because lots of people will learn from what you did as well.
I thought it was a good idea to look at other peer assess with other people because it lets you see different ways to present your projects. It also gives youideas of how to present your projects in the future. Also you learn a bit more!
I THOUGHT IT WAS A GOOD IDEA TO LET US SEE SOME OTHER PROJECTS BECAUSE IT GAVE US INSPERATION FOR NEXT TIME WE DO THE PERSONAL REASEARCH FOR OTHER THINGS.
We also learnt alot more about some different ways of doing our projectsand we saw all of the info on other volcanoes and earthquakes.
I thought it was a really good idea to see other peoples projects because it gave me some good ideas for our next project. I also learnt about other volcanoes and earthquakes that other people had done. I didn’t mind other people looking at my work because it gave them ideas too.
I think it was really good to look at and peer assess other peoples projects because it gives you lots of good ideas about how to present your project in the future. You also learn about the different volcanoes and earthquakes other people did. I didn’t mind other people looking at my project because they get to learn aswell.
I thought reading each others work was a good idea because it gives us a good chance to see how other people presented there’s and it gives us alot of information.
I thought most of the people did the same thing but we all had different facts like on mount Vesuveus. I learn’t the that moint Vesuvis
was a stratovolcano.
Most people said my project was well presented and had good information which means I learn that to keep my presentation in the same style.
I think it was a good idea to sea other peoples projects because you learn about other peoples volcanoes and earthquakes or whatever they have done. I learned different ways and ideas for my next projet. I didn’t mind other people reading my project because it would of given them ideas for thier next project.
I think it was good that we got to see others work because it gives you an idea for the next time you do a personal research. I did’nt mind that other people were looking at my work because it means they can get ideas for next time. I learned about other peoples work and you should always work your best becauseyou dont know if other people are going to see it
Looking at other peoples work gives you better ideas of how to do things and lets you learn different things.
I learnt about other peoples work and to try your hardest because you dont know if anyones is going to see your work.I did’nt mind people seeing my work because they get a chance for ideas. I thought it was a good idea because it gives people a chance for ideas for the next project.
and they could ask you for ideas
Seeing other peoples work is good because it gives you idea on what you could do next time. I didn’t really mind other people seeing my work because then i could see what other people thought and they could tell me what i could improve on in my next personal research project.
I think it was a good idea to swap projects because, you get to see what other people think of your project, and it will help with future project work because you get an idea of other layouts, and words to use in it.I don’t mind other people reading my project because it gives them a chance to learn somthing new and some tips on the layout they could use to help them with future projects.
Swaping was good because you could get more idears for next time and to see how you could improve.When people read your project they can get tips and iders for there project next time they do one.
I learned diffrent idears for my project.
i think it was a good idea because it gives you ideas for your next personal research project
I have learned that there are many different earthquakes and volcanoes.I think it was really beneficial to swap projects because you can learn from other people and you could also get ideas on presentation layout. I didn’t mind other people looking at my work because its just like the teacher seeing it.
I think it is good to look at others work to get tips and idears for next time you do your project.
Next time I add more pictures to my project and make my project front cover more colourful.
i feel when people look at my I think it is ok because I can learn from my mistake I have made.
I enjoyed reading other peoples projects because it gave me lots of good ideas for my next project.
I learnt that you can layout and present your project in many different ways.
I enjoyed hearing about what everyone thought of my project
I also think that when people read my projct it is good so you can learn what to do for next time in your project.
The idea of swapping projects was a great plan. It was fun looking at how others got on aswell. I learnt alot about volcanoes and earthquakes, and looking at different people’s project helps you think about how to lay it out and things like that. I also thought people looking at my project will help them with there next project aswell.
I don’t mind if people look at my Personal Research. They can give me ideas on how to improve my next piece of work from their comments. For example, I could change my layout or add more details.
seeing other projects was very interesting I now have loads of new ideas for my next project.I wanted to see what people thought of my work because I had put a lot of time effort into my own. I will deffinantly take on board when Ihave my next personal project.
I like reading projects because it is intresting and you get to learn about different things.
I think the next time i do a personal research I will change my layout becuase there is so many different ways to do it.
I enjoyed all the comments about my project and it will help me do a better project next time.
I think it was a great idea to look at other peoples personal research, it’s gave me loads of ideas I could consider for next time such as making my work more bold and atracting.
It was also great to hear what other people thought of my project!
I think it was a good idea doing peer assessment because you got lots of ideas from other peoples work- presentation and layout.
I think it will help me by making me improve next time on my layout and presentation. I felt fine about people looking at my work because they gave me ideas on how to improve and they also might have picked up on some ideas. It would make my next piece of personal research better from all the ideas and suggestions other people gave me.
learnt that other people have good deas too and that yours isn’t always the best because there were some really good pieces of work. I m’ not the happiest inthe class about others looking at mine but i’m happy enough
I think it was really good idea to look at and peer assess other peoples projects because it gives you loads of good ideas about how to make your project better in the future. You also learn about many different volcanoes and earthquakes other people did. I didn’t care about other people going through my project because they get to learn new things and how to improve their project in the future.
I realy enjoy the looking at outher peaple project work for homework it will make myself to know better about volcanoes and earthquakes.
But i thought i done wrong in minebut i’v done right after all.
I enjoyed looking at other peoples work. I think it is a good idea because you learn new things and it gives you ideas for how to do other projects in future. I like the idea of other people looking through my work because it gives you feedback on what people of your own age think of your work. I found out a lot about volcanoes and earthquakes when I read other peoples work.
I enjoyed looking at other peoples work because it gives me ideas
on how to present my work on the next project.I think it is a good idea for other people to look at your work because it tells you the good things and bad things about your work and how to emprove it.
I havae learnt lots of knew things about volcanoes and earthquakes know.
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I learned alot by looking at other peoples work because you don’t know what to expect.
it gave me lots of information for future projects.
the presentation could be good or bad then the person who’s project you did knows what to do in the future
I really injoyed looking at other peoples projects because it gave me lots of information on what i can improve for next time.I liked it because when i read my comments because I know what people thought of my project!
I really injoyed doing my project
I really liked looking at other people’s projects because it helps you to get ideas for your next project and think how you could enprove your’s as well. I feel it is good when they also look at my project because when they are doing a peer assesment they can tell you some good things about your project and some of things you can improve on.i really find it intresting doing projects because it helps you find out lots of diffrent facts on the project that you have done.
i like reading other peoples work.
~i found out about many different volcanoes and earthquakes.
~It gives you good ideas about projects you get in future.
~other peoples projects have been done in many different ways, this gives you knew ideas about how to present your work in future.
~i don’t really mind other people reading my project.
Number 38 is mine
its annie’s it will not let me say my name dont know why
I think seeing other peoples work is good because you learn lots of things.
It would help you because you could use some of thier ideas on your next project.
I dont mind letting people see mine because they can learn from it.
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I enjoyed looking at other people’s projects because it gave me varied ideas about my next project and how to use appropriate vocabulary and layout. I felt completly fine about showing my project to others because it gives them ideas about thier next project and how to show a good presention, layout, style and disciptive sentances. I have put all my work into this project and i hope my classmates and teacher like it!
I think seeing others people’s projects is good because it can give you ideas and help you improve in your projects that we will have to do in future.It’s good that i can see others and others can see mine. We all can learn in a fun way
I think seeing other peoples work helped me see what to do on my next project
you can learn other thing that you did not see when you where doing your project
I don’t mind people looking at my work because they can learn from it too
The good thing about seeing other peoples homework is that you can learn from it.
The comments that people gave me will make even more confident with my next personal research task.
I liked others looking at my work because if I get a good remark I feel quite proud.
I thought that seeing other peoples projects was beneficial in lots of ways.
It helped you see how it could be done using different approaches and you pick up a bit of knowledge along the way as well.
I didn’t mind other people reading my project because I thought that I did alright.
i liked to see other peoples project because you can get new ideas to help in the next project
i thought the comments were really good it gave me a good feeling
about my next project
i really liked it when the others looked because i thought they would like it
I think that reading other people’s project is good because you can learn from it and you can get new ideas for your next project. I don’t mind people reading my project because they can learn from mine and the comments that I got gave me a good feeling about the next personal research task
I realy liked looking at some other projects because it gives you ideas for your next project coming. As well it was good seeing comments on your work and it makes you feel proud of what you’ve worked hard on. It was good because I learned lots of new things about other volcanoes and earthquakes.
Personally, i found looking at other peoples projects extremely interesting because i learned about other volcanoes and earthquakes i didn’t know about previously.
Im very excited about the next project. lol xx
by Mhairi
To fined out more info about lots of volcanoes and earthquakes.
It will help you to be prepared for the next project.
I felt fine because I thout my project was good.
It was good seeing other peoples project becuase you could get ideas for your next project and I liked thtat other people got to read yours so they can tell you what you did good and bad.
It was good seeing other peoples project becuase you could get ideas for your next project and I liked that other people got to read yours so they can tell you what you did good and bad.
I think it was a good idea because it was interesting to see what other people had done. And get ideas for our next personal research!
I think it was a good idea to look at each others projects because know we know what we need to improve on and the other people also know what they need to improve on. I learned that Mt St Helens is in America and that Kobe is in Japan.
I think it is good idea to look at each others progects because it also tells you stuff you didn’t know and it helps you for your next progect.
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I think that seeing other peoples work was a good thing because if they done something that was really good you could mabey add it to your next poject! And you can tell them about what they could do to improve for there next project!!
The benafit for me was getting idea’s for the next personal research and learnig new facts i never knew about!!!
It was good having other people looking at my work and assessing it.
I learned about different vocanoes and earthquakes from reading other people’s projects. I hope other people learned loads from mine!
i thought it was good to see other peoples work because it given me lots of other ideas for my next project
i think its a good idea looking at other peoples projects because you can learn a lot from other peoples work,I learned so much on all different Earthquakes & Volcanoes
i think it was a good idea looking at other peoples projects because i learned a lot more about different volcanoes and earthquakes
I found it very interesting reading other people’s projects and seeing how other people lay theirs out. All of the other people’s projects gave me ideas on how to improve my own next time. I didn’t mind other people seeing my project and found their comments helpful.
I found looking at other peoples prodjects intresting and seeing other peoples information. I think other peoples prodjects gave me ideas for my future prodjects. I dident mind other people looking at my prodject and their comments were very helpful.
I liked looking at other people’s projects and it will give me an idea on how to do my next project .I think the comments sheets where a good idea because it gave you an idea of what you done good or what you done bad.
I liked looking at other peoples projects because it can help you with your next one. I dident mind other people looking at my project because I am proud of what I have done.
I liked looking at other peoples projects because it can help you with your next one. I dident mind other people looking at my project because I am proud of what I have done.
I THOUGHT IT WAS A GOOD IDEA BECAUSE IT GAVE YOU BETTER IDEAS FOR NEXT TIME
I looked at six other projects and it was interesting to see how differently people wrote about the same subject in different ways.
I liked people looking at my work but was worried that they would damage it after it took so long.
I found looking at other peoples projects a good way of learning because it helps you to see the standard and ideas for projects of my age.I don’t mind people looking at my project.
I thought it was a good idea to let us see other people’s work so I good get ideas for next time .Also I thought it was a good idea to let other people write a comment on my work so I know on what to improove on next time.
i thought looking at other peoples projects because you get to see what other people have done and how they have presented it and it gives you ideas for your next project
I think it was a good idea to swap projects to let us see what they have done so we might use that idea on our next project. I also thought it was a good idea to let other people to write you a comment to say what you could improve on.
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