Spicing Up our Spelling November 24, 2008
Posted by smacniven in : 2008-09, working together , trackbackWe are using our 16 spelling words this week to do a short story on a theme we have decided with a partner. We will choose 8 words each and together we will share the work and our ideas to produce a whole story. We are really trying to use our words imaginatively and accurately. Hope you enjoy our work….
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I am doing part 1 of our story called Christmas Shopping.Rachel is doing part 2 you will find.
I was christmas eve,we had left christmas shopping to long. So we raced into the car and went down to Woolworths. Woolworths was the hottest shop we had ever been in before. All the cheap and good stuff had gone.(The cheapest thing was stickers that was 50p) We spent hundreds of pounds on christmas presents.Outside was the wildest weather we had ever seen!
Bravest Biggins was a clown, he had the cheapest but biggest house in the street. He lived the nearest to Britains Got Talent. He had the hottest house ever because his heater was broken! Bravest Biggins was the largest and fattest person in the world. His dad was the nicest, thinest and smallest person ever and his mum was the fittest person in the world. He entered Britains Got Talent and thought Simon was the rudest person he’d met, but he still got through to the next round. In the next round he was the latest person to get called out to comfirmed, he was through. In the final he was eating the ripest apple in the world. He won it, but the votes were the closest ever in the show. He was the wildest person on earth when his name was called out!
I am doing the 1st part of the story and Ailidh is doing the second part as you will see further down.
NEW BOY IN SCHOOL + SPORTS DAY.
It was a normal day, or was it ? A new boy had come to school. Some people thought he was the the nicest, but others thought he was the rudest. He always was the latest, but he lived the closest to the school. He always had an apple, and it was the ripest. He was the bravest boy and the boy who was nearest to all the highest scores in school. He was the largest boy in our class by far. Sports day had arrived, so we were expecting him not to do very well.
I am doing part 2 of the chirstmas shopping.With Rosie.G.
Outside we saw the biggest toy shop.It had the largest toys and the nicest people you have ever met.We went in the toy shop and we saw the biggest toy we had ever seen.On the way home our car was stuffed with christmas shopping.It was the latest hour we had been up.The next day it was christmas day.
A Day In The Life Of A School Girl
When i wake up i run to the cheapest bus. Where not many other children go. When i get to school, i always get teased by pupils. They call me names and kick me just because i am the thinnest and the smallest! I line up and the teacher takes me and my class inside. She is a wonderful, wise teacher. At break, which turns out to be the hottest day ever, i am still the happiest, fittest and also the silliest.I like to play with my friends and we play funny games,which make me laugh!!!!!!!!!
This was by Rebecca,to be continued by laura then flora.
I am doing part 3 of A Day in the Life of a School girl with Rebecca.P who is doing part 1 and Laura.P is doing part 2.
Even though I am the smallest in my class I am also the bravest,well some of the time. I will tell you the time when I was really brave. It was quite a while ago when there was a spider,or you could say a tarantula,on the teacher’s desk .Everyone was scared even the teacher. I was frightend to death because it was the largest spider I had ever seen but I pulled up the courage and lifted the spider up the closestI could and put it in my tray.It was the nicest spider I had ever held(it was the first spider I had ever held) I had to do something nice to the spider because I knew nobody else would. It was just a fact. I thought long and hard until I had an idea.I would give it the ripest apple on the fruit tray. I hope the spider likes apples. When I was walkimg home from school I had to let the spider into the park but while doing this the clock striked 5pm so I let the spider go and ran home as fast as I could. When I got home you could imagine that I got in deep trouble because it was the latest I had ever been. I hope you enjoyed my story.
The End
I am doing my story with Rosie C as you have seen further up.
NEW BOY IN SCHOOL+SPORTS DAY continued…
Even though he was the biggest and fattest he was the fittest.He was even fitter than the thinnest boy in the class who used to be the fastest before the new boy came.The new boy was the wildest too.Sports day was the hottest day of the year but he brought the smallest and cheapest bottle of sun cream so he burnt.Everyone laughed at him because of this even though he had won all the races.
by Ailidh
I hope you enjoyed our story.
I am doing a story with Sarah and you can read the rest of the story on the different piece of paper and here’s the start.
Hello,my name is Lucy and i come from Australia. Now today is christmas eve and tomorrow is christmas . I can’t wait!
yawn!!!
Sorry it’s the middle of the night.
WHAT’S THAT?i Think it’s santa i can here him because i am the closest to our presents.He is probably the bravest and nicest.
The reasone i say that he’s brave is that he goes down chimneys. That will probably be the hardest part of the job because he is the fattest.He will like it this winter because it is the hottest.
Morning/i ran to the nearest preasent opened it and i got a puppy. yay! After a while he was the smallest and wildest ever!
THE RAINFOREST
Once there was a man who was the wildest, fattest and bravest man in the rainforest. He always ate the ripest piece of fruit to try and make him thinner. When he had finished eating he gave a massive belch! His friends called him the rudest person in the Rainforest.
One day he was the nicest person in the world because he saved his friends life from a lion which nearly ate him! He was the closest man to the lion when its mouth snapped shut but luckily the mouth closed on a stick and not the fat man!
We are going on an exotic holiday at the hottest place possible. We don’t have enough money to go toHawaii so we are going to the cheapest place we can find in Spain. There will be the ripest fruit (well, hopefully there will be) and we will be taking the latest ipod to enjoy on the plane journey. My brother is the bravest traveller of all and isn’t frightened of the wildest or rudest places we might find. I think it will be out nicest holiday ever!!!
I am doing this with Flora D and Rebecca P.
I am doing Part 2!
I am the nearest to the school and I have the rudest talking partner. In my class there is someone who is the wildest child. They are the biggest in the class and the fattest!
To be continued by Flora D …
After the wildest man fought the lion he went back to his closest home it was the largest and the biggest but unfortunately the hottest. The wild man had 5 houses the cheapest was definitely the smallest because the wild man didn’t find good wood for that house so he didn’t want to make it big, The good thing is that he had a little friend that lived nearest to that house than all his other friends. The wild man thought he was weird and the thinnest person he has ever seen but he thinks he owns a place out of the rain forest where you could become the fittest person in the land.The weird person and the wild man got a long with each other very well.
One day Mollie was having a party and she invited her closest friend Rachel.We were going to the nearest cinema,it was the rudest film ever.We came home at 10pm, that was the latest we’ve ever stade-up.My mum was the nicest she has ever been because she gave us the ripest apples in the tub,they were the largest too!Mollie was the bravest because she put her hand in the evil pot of spaghetti!
I am doing my story with Alice, this is part 1
SCHOOL TRIP
Our teacher, Ms Morgan was the bravest because she went up to our head teacher, asking for a school trip to the closest zoo. Mr Bogey (our head teacher) liked Ms Morgan so he said “yes”. He phoned for the largest bus to come and pick us up. We had to wear safari gear which wasen’t in the latest fasion but was ok. The bus driver was the rudest person I had ever met! He wasn’t the nicest person either. The bus broke down when we were nearest to the river.We had to take out our packed lunches, I had the ripest banana.
Alices part now……………………..
Part 1
The pop stars first show
Once there was a pop star called Alicia and she was about to go on stage for her first performance. Her manager got the largest stage and hall. She didn’t feel the bravest but she was confident. Alicia was the nicest person I’d ever met. Her best friend was nearest to her when she was having her makeup done and she made her feel she could do it. When she was ready, she got behind the curtain and went on stage. The curtain opened and she thought she was the closest thing to being a real pop star.
You will find part 2 with Ingrid (5c)
I am doing my story with Katie,this is part 2
THE POP STARS FIRST SHOW
The crowd got the wildest they had ever been.As she started singing every one thought it was the biggest hit. Everybody thought she was the thinnest ,prettiest singer with the best voice. The crowd defini tely thought her album wouldn’t be the cheapest because it was so good! Even the smallest children got up and started dancing!
After the show Alishia had the fattest burger to celebrate but she was still the fittest person. the crowd left soon after the show because it was the hottest room. They didn’t go far because they had a party next door to celebrate!!
At the party there was lots of dancing and bouncing up and down. Alishia was still shaking but she knew it was over. Her best friend bought her a new puppy and she was naming it Minnie.
Lots of people were saving their money to buy her new album!
The cooks in the kitchen were making a big chocolate cake for her!!
I am writing this story with Celeste. I am writing part 2 of Opening Christmas Presents.
I really loved him! I decided to call him Sammy. He was cute, funny and brown with black spots.
I opened the next present. Inside was the latest dress, which was pink with white stripes, the rudest whoopy cushion, which made Sammy wag his tail and the biggest box of chocolates. They were also the largest.
My Mum only got an apple but it was the ripest, my Dad got the cheapest tie (which was also the thinnest I’ve ever seen) and my big sister, Ruby got new shoes for tap dancing. She does lots of sporty activities and is the fittest in my family.
We played with our presents most of the day. Now it’s time for bed. It’s been a great day! Goodnight!
THE SIMPSONS IN NORTH BERWICK
They all went home to have the nicest, ripest apple. It was the closest and nearest to perfection. After that Homer looked the largest because he had had seven, and Bart was the rudest and bravest because he burped afterwards and he was brave because of his strict parents. After that Marge went to a party and came back the latest ever.
I am doing the first part of the story and Angus is doing part 2 of the story
Yippie! The day had come.The smallest, thinnest trampoline is coming.I have paid my money (£1000) and it is the size of a quarter of a desk but it makes you bounce a hundred feet. But I do not care because I am the bravest boy in the world. I will be the first boy to jump on this trampoline. So I ran outside but nobody was there. Oh here it comes, Oh no thats just the pizza parlour van. Oh here it comes, oh no that was the ice cream van. Oh and this is Trampoline Gang, TRAMPOLINE GANG! Yippie!
So I ran up to the van. I felt like the bravest boy in the whole world. When I got to the van a man walked out. He looked like the biggest largest fattest man in the world. But he still did let me go on the trampoline. After my go on the trampoline I felt like the fittest person in the world. The man who let me on was actually was one of the nicest person I had ever met. I felt the hottest person in the world.
It was so good that I bought the trampoline.And I put it inn my back garden. That night I looked outb the window to see if my trampoline
was still there.But it was gone.Oh i know who took it my next door . neighbour She is the wildest person in town. So I got dressed and climbed over the fence!
After tea my mum said to Mark not to open the biggest present,but he started to cry because he thought it would be somthing good.My dad coulden’t bother geting me an expenseve present so he got me the cheepest one he could find and it was the smallest one out of them all.Then I got The jusyest carrot in the frige for rudolph and some milk for santa.After that mum said it was bed time and I got my santa pjs on and went to bed.
I am doing this with kayliegh.
I climbed over the easiest bit of the fence and crept along. I was wearing black so she wouldn’t notice me and I was creeping along when I set off a burglar alarm. I turned around and crouched down while she came out holding a gun. My jet black hair (dyed first thing) meant she wouldn’t notice me and luckily she went back in. I ran along as stealthily as I could,checked the trampoline for any traps and put it in my pocket.
There was a banana. The biggest, fattest banana you had ever seen. It could be a trap I thought but noticed it was real so I ate it. It was the ripest banana ever and I thought I was the fittest person on Earth.
I sprinted to the fence and jumped over. In the morning the neighbour called the police. They thought she was mad because they thought no small trampoline bounced you that high, so took her to the asylum. And our little town was free again.
Mollie’s mum served us the wildest food at the sleepover. There was the biggest ice cream sundae,the fattest party sausages and the smallest jelly beans ever. then we watched Britains next top model and they were the thinnest there. When we went to bed we had the hottest water bottles and the cheapest cake from Tescos. Then in the morning we went out on a moring jog and became the fittest we’ve ever been!
The End
The Simpsons in North Berwick
Bart was walking down the high street of North Berwick. He looked in the windows of Great Escape. It was the hottest day of the year. He saw a cool jumper in the shop. It was the cheapest jumper in the shop. It was the smallest and the thinnest jumper so it would have fitted Bart perfectly. Homer just came out of Moes bar and looked like the fattest and the biggest person on earth. Lisa and Marge came out of the shoe shop. Lisa was the wildest but Marge was the fittest.