The Magic Box

Posted on February 8th, 2008 by Mr Dagger.
Categories: Literacy and English.


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P6 have been reading poems by the author Kit Wright. After discussing them they were challenged to write their own poems in the style of Kit Wright. They were thinking about expanding ideas using alliteration, contradictions, opposites and similes. Here are their favourite lines.

26 comments.

Sarah

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box:
A snowdrop from the Himalayas.

james

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box a groovy green guitar making a noise like a pink and purple possessed penguin

lauren m

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

A pen that does not write or draw.

Anonymous

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

John will put in his box

A sad song sung by a happy face.

Cory will put in his box

A song from a martian on the other side of the galaxy.

ellie

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

A disco ball shining in the light.

Annabel

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box
A silver halo from an angels head.

gavin

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

i will put in my box

A feather floating from a falcons foot

Rosie

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

A freather from a fire breathing flamingo,

Bethany

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in the box:

Sheep that moo in fields of blue.

amy

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

A swish of a gleaming white unicorns tail

Matt

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box:

A big bouncing blob, barricading a barracks.

Mary

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box:

A tropical fish from the carabien sea.

Gregor

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in the box
A tree of gold planted in the earths core.

Nicholas

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box a dragon with water shooting out of his ears.

ashliegh

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

i will put in my box;

A seal swimming sideways in the sea.

cameron

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

i will put in my box
a snowboarding seal soaring down the slope!

Chelsie

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

A song as sweet as sprinkels on a fariy cake,

Lauren

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

i will put in my box a donkey on a roller coaster and a giant on a bike!

fionnlagh

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will Put in the box

A Feather Singing a starlight fight song

nicola

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box:

A song as sweet as the bon-bon i eat.

Beth

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in the box

a floating feather falling into a fire

lauren

Comment on February 8th, 2008.

I will put in my box a donkey on a rollar coaster and a giant on a bike.

Mrs MacIver

Comment on February 9th, 2008.

Fantastic work Primary 6!

marion

Comment on February 22nd, 2008.

realy good poem!

kwalk

Comment on February 22nd, 2008.

if i were you i would put a holagrame of a heart in the magic box

mrs.bachoo

Comment on May 22nd, 2008.

exotic sun

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