Self Evaluation !x!
I read my story as I was someone that hadn’t read it and this is what I noticed. I read over my story and I thoght it was pretty good when I wrote it, I thought it was good but then when I typed it I noticed that I had made a few mistakes. So I have changed them so have a look.
My first star is: That it is quite exciting!
My second star is: I like my cliff hanger at the end!
I liked the part on my story when Angela became good but it wasn’t her that did it,it was Amy.
My wish is: To extend my story